At music lesson, listening to obsidian moon:

• Four to the floor drumbeat makes it not sound like mathrock.
• Could try moving bass to offbeat, so it isn't playing with the kick.
• Could try doubling the bass and lead, like at the end of the phrase.
• Could try doing the B section only one time instead of twice, before going back into the groove.
  • As an example, listened to https://youtu.be/gQ99OMlI5cg
  • Maybe consider getting rid of the drums.
• Could try adding an accompaniment that plays whole notes an octave above the guitar.
• Could double the guitar to make the song feel like it is developing.
• I don't feel like adding a riser would feel "mathrock", so what can I do to increase tension?
  • Change the chords at the end of the verse, or just changing the root notes of the base
  • We need a chorus which feels big and contrasting in some way. Maybe chords, hits, or stops.